BRAVE – TO BE A SUICIDER

Do you think
Suicide is a foolish act ?
Is it a reck less thought?
Are suiciders spineless folks?

I say no !
Few agree so!

Raising the gifted arm,
Feeling guilt for the merciless deed
Slowly tears flourish as flood ,
Flows into thy cheek ,
As River seen a Rain ,
Your hand picks up
The most precious weapon,in pain ,
Tearing apart ,
Each cell,
Each tissue
Each ligament,
Each layer of skin,
Finally breaking
The most trembling part of nervous system,
I can witness something,
I can witness something,
As red as rubies
But flows as blood
Drop by drop ,
Making visible view to a blurry one

Oh! Oh! I can’t see?
Yep you fainted
Am I alive ?
No , you are not .
A dead yet alive soul ,
Grateful for my act ,
I am freed from guilt at last ,
But ,
Erase my every memory
Not even the happier one I need
Erase me as myself,
Help me thine ,
Oh lord ,
Forgetting all ,
The only permanent medication
For THY soul.


Still do you consider suiciders don’t suffer pain ? Are they spineless?

Do you think so ?

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10 Comments

  1. Suruchi.P's avatar Suruchi.P says:

    Heavy but feeling relieved. You’ve painted the emotions so beautifully deepika! Congo!

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    1. Deepikabanu's avatar Deepikabanu says:

      Thank you for stopping by โ˜บ๏ธ

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  2. Baira's avatar Baira says:

    A poem which has deep thoughts in me. A wonderful piece I would say

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    1. Deepikabanu's avatar Deepikabanu says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ’–

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    2. S_A_N_J_U's avatar S_A_N_J_U says:

      Well written dear๐Ÿฅบโœจ

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  3. KP's avatar KP says:

    Soulful linesโค๏ธ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜

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    1. Deepikabanu's avatar Deepikabanu says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ’•

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  4. Subhanu's avatar Subhanu says:

    Great workโ€ฆPoem ended with tears in my eyes.

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    1. Deepikabanu's avatar Deepikabanu says:

      Thank you it means a lot

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      1. Harini's avatar Harini says:

        good wrk dear ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป

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